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Every shallow breath explodes
as we spin faster than the stars.
Honey-scented and warm, the air collides
with frosty diamond lips.

As we spin faster than the stars,
the pearly galaxies of our skin shiver
with frosty diamond lips
pressed softly against shimmering satin.

The pearly galaxies of our skin shiver
as you whisper into my shoulder,
pressed softly against shimmering satin
with sighs soaked in every fluttering heartbeat.

As you whisper into my shoulder,
Honey-scented and warm, the air collides
With sighs soaked in every fluttering heartbeat.
Every shallow breath explodes.
it was february. i was not alone. i wrote a pantoum.

behold.
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SlowPulseBoy's avatar
this poem has INCREDIBLE STRUCTURE....unbelievable structure.
was that your idea?its so hard to believe it that you did such a great job on the structure.
thank you for posting it ;)