i watch you from across the street as you wait for an opening or a glowing green signal that it\'s safe to move again. you stare at the puddles covering your feet, and i want to take this flood and throw it all over us; we\'ll watch this season drip away as we hang ourselves out to dry beneath swollen storm clouds. but i just stand silently, drenched in the knowledge of every droplet and its perfect symmetry. |
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have you got this terrifying notion that this is not a shared experience? just synchronized, solitary moments bound by belief in this alone? is there anything left to smoke? i feel like i'm drowning. you talk to me in code. staring at a wooden footbridge, you say, "it's a marvel of construction. two weaknesses combine to become a strength." - the paperbacks.
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but very nice.
i love it.
i love everything you write though.
you know this.
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Times I feel I wanna shout, man it's real that way
When I think of things that make you feel that way...
flood and throw it all over us
That made my day.
I like the way it was said. And the description of both the enviroment and the person. The way this was written was fantastic. Like a "what I would do if I could do it" poem. Movie-like almost.
Rain is wonderful as is this poem.
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my favorite lines:
drenched in the
knowledge of every droplet and its
perfect symmetry.
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...look for the girl with the broken smile...
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is an awesome poem.
drip away as we hang ourselves out to
dry beneath swollen storm clouds.
was my favorite part. your writing is so... intricately comfortable. it has an infinite feeling to it. where all knowledge is captivated. beautiful poetry indeed.
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pH 3.7
The only thing that bothered me was:
"glowing green signal that
it's safe to move again. "
I stumbled reading this... because my brain kept telling me that "says" was after that. So, I kept looking for it, and couldn't find it. then my brain imploded. Anyhoo, love this. +fav. Thanks for sharing it.
(For those who are curious, the quote is from Steel Magnolias the PLAY... Ouiser 4 life.)
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"What wasted unconditional love on somebody who doesn't believe in the stuff... Oh, well."
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Sex is like math: Add the bed, subtract the clothes, divide the legs, and pray to god you don't multiply.
We come to love not by finding a perfect person, but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly
I think my favorite part is ...
silently, drenched in the
knowledge of every droplet
That is how I feel alot of the time lately, silent and drenched.
I think that you have some powerful and deeply felt poetry, and enjoy reading your work. So, I added this one to my +favs
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Thou art to me a delicious torment.
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